EXCITING OPENING
Jack: Brace yourself, behind this door there’s something the likes of which you have never seen.
Dom: Ok.
Jack: Don’t be so casual about it.
Dom: I’m not sure if I want to go through with it.
Jack: What?
The devil lady cries loudly. Jack (Lost Jack) slaps her across the face, as she rebounds back up Dom (Charlie from Lost) snaps a picture. She knocks Jack onto his back, and Charlie bolts from the room.
He hears Jack scream from behind the door. He grabs a fire poker stick, bolts into the room and the door is slammed right back in his face.
We cut to his hotel room in Translyvania, he drops the camera as he opens the door. There’s obviously nothing chasing him, but he’s still obviously shaken. He hears a flapping outside, and opens the window. A guy is walking his dog and it gets away and runs off. It’s scared of something.
He lights a cigarette, steps out onto the porch. Pops a couple of pills. Does a quick prayer in Latin.
He answers a phone call. The voice is tough-guy super spy.
How does this guy live?
He packs up all of his crap into a suitcase and leaves as soon as the knocking subsides for a minute. There’s a shadow person at the end of the hallway.
He goes into the darkroom, and drops the camera again. The film has come unraveled, and we see his eyes Pee Wee Herman style as he scrambles in the dark. Someone enters his apartment, and he backs against the darkroom wall.
Dom: Jack?
No answer
He demonstrates how to mix the photo liquid, combines it all together.
A girl shows up, “no no no this is a bad time no no no”. She rings the doorbell
Dom hides, peaks through blinds
She’s waving up at him
He sees the black limo at the end of the block
Presses the button to let her up, she closes the door nonchalantly and a stake strikes against it.
Cut to him running down the stairs, he grabs her by the hand
“Dom!”
They rush up the stairs, she refuses to run.
Dom slams door
Kathy: Dom! What’s the big idea!
Dom: Shhh. they listen, there’s no sound. She rolls her eyes at him.
Kathy: You aren’t even ready.
Dom: Ready for what?
Kathy: You don’t remember what today is?
Dom: We have a lot more serious things to be worrying about right now.
Kathy: More serious than your sons birthday?
window glass starts vibrating
Dom: Get down!
He tackles her under the window, something fragile in her purse breaks
Kathy: What are you doing? she opens purse, a present is in there broken
Dom: There’s an evil energy out here...
Kathy: Are you on drugs, again, Dom?
cut to next scene, she’s rummaging through his drawers
Dom: I’m not on drugs, it’s not how it looks. This isn’t about our shit.
There’s a loud noise from outside, he grabs a gun from inside a book and closes the door and blocks it off
The picture in the darkroom has finished developing, it’s an evil demon. It moves inside of the picture.
He points the gun at the door as the key rattles. Jack stumbles through, beat up. He shoots and misses.
Jack: You left me there, you son of a bitch.
Dom: I wasn’t ready for this, I thought you were dead.
Jack: We’re both dead.
Dom: I kind of had that feeling.
Jack uses his fingerprints to activate a special service on his phone
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